Ow, my brain...
The Monty Python reference was great, and even the Chuck Norris joke was funny, but once you got into the long string of internet jokes it just got... dry. >9000 is WAY overused, 300 references are overdone, Naruto BGM was OK (concert scene was hillarious)... Overall very nicely done, just PLEASE don't let the internet joke thing get too out of hand...
Yes, I know I got carried away with the internet jokes. It's my way of testing the audience to see if they preferred internet memes over orignial humor. Most viewers responded positively with this one, so I'm not bothered at all.
Always looking for new ideas for a science project, a book, a game, whatever. Good inspiration is always a plus.
Age 38, Male
Manufacturing
Endicott, NY
Joined on 6/18/05
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